One day the kid was at school. The kid was scared of the teacher. The teacher was scared of the kid. It was foggy. The teacher called the cops and told them that someone broke in the school. The whole school was trashed up and broken the and windows had gun shots. So the kid grabbed a bike and went home. The cops broke in the boy's front door. The kid used some of his super power. With his super power he got the keys then he unlocked the door and ran outside. He was hiding in the woods. The cops came looking for him. The cops found him. He used his super power and made them fling away. He slept out there.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 4 and my teacher is Mr Martyn. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, October 23, 2020
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1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
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What an interesting story Mason.
ReplyDeleteThe ending was different to how I thought it would end.
When you say it's a music story,what does that mean?.I look forward to hearing from you.
Have a great weekend.
love the story love it
ReplyDeleteHello Mason.
ReplyDeleteJust a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today